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Well.

Definately Chaotic... The intro wasn't as good as it could be, When I think of shattering the sky I imagine glass being shattered by a hammer. This does sound like it, but it annoyed me how it started chaotic right away... I believe it would have been much better with a gradiant to it, like the first strike with the hammer is always the hardest because there is no going back.

ShatterTheSky22 responds:

I have a feeling a lot of people would agree with you on that, and that the intro immediately turns people off. I wanted to kind of establish the motif of that insanity coming towards the end, but I think I went about it wrong. Perhaps some gentler section that gets us to the sky first before we shatter it.

Thank you for the score and review!

[TSR Audio]

Yes... definately can hear it...

but... maybe stay as true to the original melody as much as possible and introduce it sooner. Either way, you still did a good job portraying bells ringing here, Well done I must say.

ShatterTheSky22 responds:

Thanks for the score and review! ^__^
I suppose I could've brought out the original melody sooner, but I got a bit caught up in my own material and didn't want to rush it. lol Call it excessive pride I suppose.

[TSR Audio]

Well...

Im loving the decay... as well as the strumed percussion of it. I also like the somewhat silent strings in the background of the song, hardly noticable, but without it the feel wouldn't be right. You really give a good feeling to this... Definately the vibe you were trying to make. 10/10

ShatterTheSky22 responds:

What an awesome review!
Feels good to know all the subtle effects worked. Thank you!

[TSR Audio]

well... again...

this seems to be repetetive... As for something that is suppose to be like a couple's dance... I would say it would need to be more mellow, you have alot of tension going on in this song, you can keep the synth if you want, but you need to lose anything that causes tension with it then... It is really hard to see a couple dancing in this song. Sorry Tehvoid, but you need to work at it more.

:D <----My Spamming Face

this is going to be a poor review as I have hardly anything to say on this... You hardly ever make fast paced songs so it was unexpected, and yes the Electric Guitar definately needs work. Other then that. WOOT!!! SPAM!!!! 10/10

thatbennyguy responds:

Haha yeah this was definitely a spamming piece... I just wanted to go all random and see what reviews I'd get. This is a lesson showing me that sometimes it doesn't take good music to make people feel happy. Because tbh, this isn't great music. but it's nevertheless exciting music.

Adventures of Benny learning :) Thanks for listening!

Benjamin

This is a good song.

I havn't gotten to review any of your songs for a while now... I completely forgot you couldn't get back onto your old account. anyways after listening to it, it's key and melody actually reminds me of a completely different song. It is very professional though like pretty much all of your works. The creativity was very well, and while this song was very loose feeling... IT POPPED!!! I liked that. Keep up the good work Benny!!!

thatbennyguy responds:

Thx dude u r literally the man. Glad you enjoyed the song.

Benjamin

I listened to the original...

You did a good job remixing it, although yours kinda creeps me out... lol It has a creepy sense to it. Anyways I figure you realize that the original was quite repetitive, and so is this remix, but what do you expect right. Overall good job, you deserve cookies for your music. 9/10 (It's only fair, thats what I gave that other guy. :D)

Wow!!!

Like previous review... it is indeed very repetetive. But overall is done very well. I don't like the scream effect or whatever that is, I believe it was very unneeded. Anyways 9/10.

OpenLight responds:

Haha, thanks, and I agree with what you said completely. This is, as you can tell, my first song ever haha. I've gotten so much more familiar with the program I use and with the whole concept of using a mixer.

Thanks for the review!

Well thats a good picture.

I love this!!! Out of curiousity is it like a duet then. I also like your addition of the synth bass in this(I believe thats what it is...) :D Anyways, very well done... I think I am going to have to add you to my favorites, you show alot of potential here man. Can't wait to hear more. :D

drew6464 responds:

That's not a synth bass, btw, it's just a piano playing the chords on a really low octave. And thanks! Yes, it's supposed to be a duet. At 0:48, it was intended for the pianos to switch roles. One piano did the main theme, and the other did the awesome minute-long solos in the background. Those are in most of my songs; they're mostly just collections of notes rearranged in an epic way in the same chord. :D

Very Well Done!!!!

A little repetetive, but that makes up for itself. It is very fast paced, creates that feel of running. I would recommend giving it a little more umph and apply that tension, and you should have it... I really hope you get more reviews. :D

drew6464 responds:

Thank you so very much! Sorry for the late response, but thank you. I know it is repetitive; sadly, that is the flaw of all of my songs. I've actually watched the Rabite Leek Spin long before making this song, and it's pretty nice. :D Totally off-topic, but I'm honored.

I am creative and love to draw, cartoon, write music, animate... I believe that with enough work Newgrounds will come to see that I have what it takes to be what I believe I can be. Thank You Newgrounds.

Kyle Schaff @GamekrazzyProduction

Age 30, Male

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Hardin, Montana

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