Dang. I love this.
The only thing you could do to make this song better is actually sing your lyrics in it. invest some money in a microphone, and btw, make sure it's a good investment, I have one, but it sucks. 10/10.
Dang. I love this.
The only thing you could do to make this song better is actually sing your lyrics in it. invest some money in a microphone, and btw, make sure it's a good investment, I have one, but it sucks. 10/10.
Thank you, gamekrazzypro, glad you like this song. I was thinking about getting my sister to sing, or some other girl. Because I really think a girl's voice would really suit this one.
So, I'm feeling very sleepy now, and I'm veryglad you reviewed many of my submissions. Thanks, bro. I'll get round to reviewing some of yours soon
-SpXer-
funk, huh...
it's under funk, but could easily be hip hop. :D. The synth is very unfitting though. It doesn't blend to well. though the song sounds cool. 9/10
Thanks Gamekrazzypro, I could see how it's hip hop as well. The synth could be seen as unfitting and not blending properly, true. Thanks for your feedback, bro, and I'm glad u think it sounds cool. Ur music's cool 2 :)
-SpXer-
hmmmm....
nice transition from synth to piano, sounds cool, but the bass drum has got to be so f***ing annoying it's ruining the song, come on man, work a little more on the bass, btw I love at 1:36. Keep it up, though you seem to have more music then me, your talented man, I want you to keep expressing yourself through your amazing music. 9/10 on this one. the drum screwed you!
Thx gamekrazzypro for ur comments. Thanks for your comment about the synth and piano, I tried to make that as smooth as possible. Now that I think about it, that bass drum does sort of ruin the feel of the song. It's too distorted that it overcomes the rest of the song. And thanks for that part about my piano solo, I spent a bit of time on it. It was supposed to be just a small embellish at the end of it, but then I got carried away. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Thanks for listening! -SpXer-
not bad but...
here's a tip, if you want something good don't repeat something over and over, I mean at least change the volume, even film scores, who tend to repeat parts over and over, try to at least hide the back bone of the song, If I were you I would do what they would do, and gradually decrease in volume till it's just strings, then increase till your ears burn up... ok maybe not taht far, but you get the point... :D cudos. 7/10.
I agree. The strings in your right ear sort of are overwhelming. The pace doesn't really slow down, does it? I seem to have the case of mis-voluminising. Or something. But that's true, the right ear does get annoying. I might make another orchestral tune soon. Man, gamekrazzy, you got me inspired! I'm sure to review some more of your submissions when I get the time. Possibly tomorrow or the next day when I'm not busy. But thank you, I think I'll go to bed very soon.
-SpXer-
I would say it's annoying but....
I'd be lying... :D It's not annoying, there just needs to be more to it. If you add a middle and end, it would be more likely epic boss music, while because it doesn't it's the so called annoying intro repeating itself. It needs more to it man, but is good so far. 8/10.
Hehe thanks Gamekrazzypro, I should probably do something similar to this and put a drum beat in later on, that'd make it more epic. Put some good bass in there, and hey presto! you've got boss music :) Thanks much bro
-SpXer-
lol, chopsticks.
neat, chopping of the beats. Neat concept of emotions, actually makes me think of a race, would be perfect for an epic animation. Anyways "cookies to you". WOw, been a while since I said that. :D. lol. 10 because it's just for fun.
Thanks bro much appreciated. I did have quite a lot of fun making this, and I've tried a few times to emulate the sound, but failed miserably. It seems like a one-off thing. Thanks for the feedback, Gamekrazzypro. U r the bomb. :)
-SpXer-
neat beat....
actaully it does remind me of zelda for some reason, because of your bass drums in the background. You know the music for the Forsaken fortress in wind waker. yeah, thats what seems to be going through my head. Anyways love the beat, but as much as I love it taht's all it is, and there doesn't seem to be any differences between the beets as far as even a slow fast change, I would like to hear a half beat rather then a bunch of quarter, eighths, sixteenths, and such... 8/10
Thx gamekrazzypro... I haven't played wind waker but I had a listen to it on youtube and yeah the bass does have the same feel to it. I agree much of the beat is quarter and eighths etc. It gets more interesting in the fadeout, and maybe I should have made that part longer, or sooner. Thx for ur review, Gamekrazzypro, very much appreciated.
-SpXer-
Very slow and relaxing...
Although I do notice it is the same progression over and over, and yes that does get annoying. I would not dare say this is not ambient, for it dramatizes the moment. For a slow and relaxing piece I must say this is pretty good man. I do recommend changing it up such as speeding up the tempo here and there. I dont mean over dramatizing the tempo, but maybe move the piece a little, because honestly this one seems to drag. 8/10
But I do change the entire melody halfway through the song. I'm not sure I understand what you mean
Awsome!!
I have trouble helping with you on this song. Its that good. lol. Maybe a little more lyrics I guess. I mean you would think you would hear the title more then once. lol. I like it. Keep it up man!!! 10/10
It's actually in there twice, my friend ;P
Melody????
Your Melody needs to com in sooner, because the beat gets annoying at the beginning. I like how you do use Dynamics and came in on the melody, and how it goes to a softer sound then back. It is very neat, but yeah. I would say that it just needs more at the beginning. I noticed you also dont sway from the main beat. Which is ok, but try being a bit more creative. I like it, but I feel it can be much better. 8/10.
Thank you for the tip, I will look up to it. And thank you for your vote and review!
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