Wow!
IT's pretty nice, but work on your audio levels, because the drums are a bit too loud and the base is too quiet, hard to follow the song. At 1:02 it gets way to loud, and then goes quiet again. Just work on keeping things equal so that you can hear everything and not just the synth, or the drum and all. overall I give you an 8/10 5/5
This is actually a work in progress. I haven't really mixed and i'm going to do some different variation things. I probably should have said that.
Creepy Pasta!!!!!!
This song was playing and BEN from Majora's Mask appeared! 0.o
on a serious note, the song needs moment of silence for it to loop nicely, try adding that or fading the last part out. Don't get me wrong it loops alright, but it could be better. The song clashes alot, but that helps with the creepy feeling, I think you need a noise channel to simulate wind... Because this loop would send a chill down my spine with that added FX. :P good loop! 10/10 5/5
thanks for the suggestions, I noticed after uploading it that the looping isnt perfect. This was a segment of a track I was working on but wasn't sure where to go with it so I took this loop out. I think I wil work more on it
update: made some changes :)
Nice!
great melody line. Synth is a bit annoying for the first part though. I like the singing. Nice intro overall. 10/10. 5/5.
Do you know what Reverb is?
Also work on your rythm... Other than that, it came out alright.
Was BEN messing with you song?
:D I like it... BEN did a good job. Very neat concept of reversing your song. It came out nicely... loops nicely too. What people don't realize that you have to wait until after the first loop for it to work nicely.
Anyways Very Good JOB!!!!!
Who is Ben?
Sweet Sweet Music...
I like the FX of the reel being played in this... And everything just came out nicely. Your Story talked to me by the way... As I was listening to this I saw snow falling from the sky and the camera was moving up to a house on the hill with kids playing in the snow, and it was all old camera footage, like someone looking through their memories...
That's almost entirely what I was seeing when this popped into my head. It's crazy how well music can portray a story without words.
Thankyou for listening.
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