hmmmm. I like it.
Pretty cool, and indeed it does repeat itself, but within reason. I like it, very creative, and I love the trills. Though the beat gets a little annoying and bothers my ear at times. The melody and bass seem to keep it moving for me. Cutos. Keep it up.
Well, it was indeed a mini-loop.
Nothing against you, but did you put any effort into this, because even loops need effort. I agree and say that I love regae too, but this could have been much better. Perhaps a bit more out there on the melody or something, but this doesnt grab attention at all. Nice go at it though. 5/10, try to make something a little more... well yeah. Its not bad.
Neat.
Next time be creative, you do not have to use similar instruments. I do love the fact, though i believe it was probably just the way it was output, that you have the emptiness at the end spacing your next note. It is kinda neat. good job for a remix i guess. 9/10, because Forest Maze is awsome, and you did a farely good job of remaking it.
lol
Was this suppose to make me laugh.
nice use of a crossfade.
BTW you not kidding about it being fkd up.
10/10.
the whole world is fucked up, I¨m going my own direction :-)
Thanks for your kind review!
peace out man!
Do you know what your doing?!
Look ill be leaniant, it is obvious you probably put forth alot of work in this, but here is the deal, this song is way to repetetive. your bass is annoying and this song doesnt make any sense. It gets a little better towards the end, but please try to get away from repeated bass when thats all that is heard. Do something different. I give you a 3 for effort.
yeah thanks for yourb review. actually i didn't put much effort in this, maybe that's why the melody is so repetitive. just to bring some atmosphere into this one. i'll come back to this with more inspiration, maybe it will be a candy then)
Awsome.
This song reminds me of another song, but put to 8-bit lol. Nice job. Nice back beat, and the bass part is pretty epic in it. Melody is pretty good, all you need is more to your song, it gets way too repetetive and annoying. lol. It was good though no other words but... see title...
Neat Melody, but way to repetetive.
I thought the Melody was neat, but this could have been much better. Try using fades. There really was no motion in the beginning. Try to make the music more fluid. CROSSFADES ARE IMPORTANT. Anyways great job, and please compose more. I know you can do better though, so I give you a 9/10.
Awsome.
Love your lyrics man, but you so should have just got yourself a microphone and sang it yourself. Dude, I give you cookies on the beat though. definately a dance. I loved it. Refrain is really simple. Great Job. 10 for effort.
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