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hmm I like the tone to start out... not sure I like the clashing at 0:11 and other parts like it. I like the atmosphere though the tune gives roughly 30 seconds in. I am going to assume that your notes are not harmonizing too well on purpose at 1:18, IMO though I am not sure I like that (especially since it gets dragged on further into the piece). I really like the way this feels at 2:20. Now things start to get a bit on the repetitive side 3 minutes in.

Anyways, overall this is a fairly good piece, granted there are some theory issues that I am unsure if they were intentional by you or not... IMO I didn't like their placements though. Overall I'd say this is about 4 stars out of 5. Keep up the good work Mock Up!

Dude! In all honesty voice created effects are freaking AWESOME!
IDK about these lyrics... they seem very random. lol however I swear I am far more interested in the vocals and instrumentals.

The feel of this song is amazing. I'm not much for swearing, but who cares. I enjoyed the piece none the less. The ending of the song probably could have used some work, however. Other then that I hear no other flaws. 5/5

Whoa!!!! Your back?

This is really interesting btw. I feel that the background synth should be a bit louder. As I can't really hear it. It does get louder about 2 minutes in... And I do like what you did there. I would love to see this as a full length song as the patterns are quite nice... obviously because it's just a WIP and ends so dramatically though I got to give you 4/5 stars. :P I did like it though!

Well! I like this vibe! I definitely feel it's a WIP. So if you could turn this into something AWESOME! that'd be great!

ThePal responds:

Well, we'll see, we'll see...
But thanks for the motivation! :D

Slightly repetitive. I recommend adding a few extra parts here and there as it is fairly short and would get repetitive awfully quick.

Another recommendation when doing loops as well is to make sure when exporting your music to have the music wrap... (This allows your music to loop seamlessly.)

Nice jams! This is a very moving song that really gives feels of moving along. The flow is paced very well, and the bass is fantastic... not too much, but not too little! The ending probably could have had a little more work, but overall this piece is quite good. 4/5

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

thanks gamekrazzy you were there since the start

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Well it's very experimental to say the least... I mean there are some nice little melodies in this song, however... In all honesty... it sounds like you just placed patterns places without a care in the world as there was no real flow to the song...
Taking into effect that this song is under the experimental category, I would say it's very fitting... but perhaps you should put more effort into things like this... even if they are experimental.

MockOff responds:

Hmm, I don't really see much of no flow. Maybe the outro could have been constructed neater, but that's about it for me personally. Thanks for taking the time to listen though.

What is this? Jazz? Funk? it's like a mix of everything,,, and I am enjoying it! Kinda feels still experimental if you know what I mean, but it has potential... you could probably makes something jaw dropping from this... but right now it seems a bit lacking somehow... I am not quite sure where to put my finger on it... but something is lacking... still. 4.5/5 buddy! Translates to a 5!

Wow! I'd love to make a lengthy review on this guy, but in all honesty I can hear nothing wrong with this, and have no experience with guitar, or for that matter recording it. Overall it is quite good. I love the added synth near the end. This song definitely feels like it would fit a video game quite well.

5 stars our of 5!

Lol, what'd you do? take a classic rock concept and write it with synth?

Either way it's not bad, however I do recommend a little something at 0:30... You know what it is to refresh a melody right? Otherwise this seems like the finished project will likely be a bit repetitive.

Overall I like the song... I'd add a few more parts in, but that's just me. For a WIP, it is still quite good. 4 out of 5 stars.

8-bitheroes responds:

Yeh its pretty much a rock n roll progression, I know thats a lame concept in this day and age but it was catchy so I ran with it. It deffinitly needs extra parts in there but its abit out of my element haha so not sure what il do.

I am creative and love to draw, cartoon, write music, animate... I believe that with enough work Newgrounds will come to see that I have what it takes to be what I believe I can be. Thank You Newgrounds.

Kyle Schaff @GamekrazzyProduction

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Hardin High School

Hardin, Montana

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